Editing

I have continued trying to place a music video with the footage I have. I have added the song onto Final Cut Express, and saw how well the music video went. I think I want to get more shots of the singer lip -synching, and I think I can get more shots shown from the singers perspective to create a more nostalgic      
atmosphere. I want to try to get all the filming done by next week. It would also be good if I made the most out of visual metaphors. The footage I have don't quite reflect the vibe the music video fits into with. I need to get more establishing shots, and maybe some angle shots as well to add some more variety. I  feel that the person I am using needs to get a little more familiar with the song. I need to make the music video more girly. I also think cross-cutting would be very good. I have tried to do this with the editing I have so far. I think that if she sings in the place as where the narrative takes place.